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While I was looking for an RK doujin image, I found an unfinished K&K fic based on that image! < Is Happy > Of course, I'm already writing a new story based on the same picture, 'cause I thought this one lost, so now I have to decide which I like better. <grumble grumble>
Anyway, I also found some silly things I wrote back when I was trying to write Heart's Ease. I may have posted them to rkfanfic, but I don't think they've seen the light of day anywhere else. So, in a spate of silliness... here they are. Now, these are things I actually wrote -- as in typed directly into the story -- when what I wanted to say wasn't cooperating. They aren't things I came up with later.
#1: Quite a Handful
His mind flashed white as she arched against him, her coaxing voice further weakening his resistance. "Aa . . ." he finally breathed, unable to refuse either her or himself any longer. Laughter rippled through him at her unexpected response, and tilting his head, he caught her mouth in a slow, lingering kiss. When it ended, he shifted so that she was once again cradled in his lap, then rose to his feet in a single, fluid movement, bringing her with him. "'Yatta'?" he asked, arching one eyebrow as he looked down at her.
"Mmmm," she answered, snuggling against him and peeking up at him through her lashes.
Chuckling at her noncommittal response, he carried her down the hall to his room, pausing at the entrance to ask her one last time.
"Kaoru?"
"Yes! Yes yes yes! Hurry up and get on with it!" her voice was a mixture of exasperation and amusement.
He trembled slightly at the annoyance in her voice. "Demo... could you open the door? My hands are full."
#2: Starvation Diet
Kaoru hesitated, biting her lip, but the thought of removing his shirt was far less intimidating -- and far more appealing -- than removing her own. Slowly she eased the fabric from his shoulders and down his arms, the loose folds falling about his waist, leaving his torso bare save for the bandages wrapped around his stomach. Blue eyes both curious and admiring, she let her gaze wander over him. His frame wasn't as slim as it appeared when clothed, but neither was it bulky. The planes of his chest tapered to a taut, slightly concave abdomen; his arms were corded with lean muscle, evidence of his quiet strength.
Quietly, patiently . . . tensely, Kenshin watched her, finding he was as nervous as she had seemed. He was only moderately more experienced than she, and never before had his emotions been so entangled, never before had he been so conscious of the desire to please another. Anxiety warred with eagerness, hunger struggled against control. What is she thinking?
"Kenshin?" Her voice sounded worried.
"Hai?" His was nervous.
"You need to eat more. You're too skinny! Are you sure we should be doing this? Maybe you should save your energy until tomorrow. Let me get you something to eat. Ne? Ne?"
"..."
Anyway, I also found some silly things I wrote back when I was trying to write Heart's Ease. I may have posted them to rkfanfic, but I don't think they've seen the light of day anywhere else. So, in a spate of silliness... here they are. Now, these are things I actually wrote -- as in typed directly into the story -- when what I wanted to say wasn't cooperating. They aren't things I came up with later.
#1: Quite a Handful
His mind flashed white as she arched against him, her coaxing voice further weakening his resistance. "Aa . . ." he finally breathed, unable to refuse either her or himself any longer. Laughter rippled through him at her unexpected response, and tilting his head, he caught her mouth in a slow, lingering kiss. When it ended, he shifted so that she was once again cradled in his lap, then rose to his feet in a single, fluid movement, bringing her with him. "'Yatta'?" he asked, arching one eyebrow as he looked down at her.
"Mmmm," she answered, snuggling against him and peeking up at him through her lashes.
Chuckling at her noncommittal response, he carried her down the hall to his room, pausing at the entrance to ask her one last time.
"Kaoru?"
"Yes! Yes yes yes! Hurry up and get on with it!" her voice was a mixture of exasperation and amusement.
He trembled slightly at the annoyance in her voice. "Demo... could you open the door? My hands are full."
#2: Starvation Diet
Kaoru hesitated, biting her lip, but the thought of removing his shirt was far less intimidating -- and far more appealing -- than removing her own. Slowly she eased the fabric from his shoulders and down his arms, the loose folds falling about his waist, leaving his torso bare save for the bandages wrapped around his stomach. Blue eyes both curious and admiring, she let her gaze wander over him. His frame wasn't as slim as it appeared when clothed, but neither was it bulky. The planes of his chest tapered to a taut, slightly concave abdomen; his arms were corded with lean muscle, evidence of his quiet strength.
Quietly, patiently . . . tensely, Kenshin watched her, finding he was as nervous as she had seemed. He was only moderately more experienced than she, and never before had his emotions been so entangled, never before had he been so conscious of the desire to please another. Anxiety warred with eagerness, hunger struggled against control. What is she thinking?
"Kenshin?" Her voice sounded worried.
"Hai?" His was nervous.
"You need to eat more. You're too skinny! Are you sure we should be doing this? Maybe you should save your energy until tomorrow. Let me get you something to eat. Ne? Ne?"
"..."
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Date: 2009-03-11 02:42 pm (UTC)From:Those are amusing. Really, really amusing. =)
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Date: 2009-03-11 11:29 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2009-03-11 08:21 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2009-03-11 11:31 pm (UTC)From:Version one is more fun, though, as it doesn't really try to find a plausible reason for the situation in the picture. So I'll probably go with that.
Will upload it with the story! But I'm sure you've seen it before. It's Yamiguchirou
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Date: 2009-03-12 11:30 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2009-03-13 03:00 am (UTC)From:oh dear...
Date: 2009-05-29 04:47 pm (UTC)From: (Anonymous)he really is too skinny. Did you see his "bio/stats" that the author posted for him? The man is 158cm (5'3") and only weighs 48Kg (~105 Lbs). All muscle and bone that one.
XD This was great! you can make a series of how they ruin the "moment"
Cont: oh dear...
Date: 2009-05-29 05:18 pm (UTC)From: (Anonymous)Feed him!!! Kaoru! Feed him!!! or get him to feed himself cause her cooking might reduce his weight even more...