sekiharatae: (sex)
I'm going to have to change this, no?

Which was how she ended up in Midgar, learning first-hand exactly how adorable, sexy, honest, sexy, sweet, sexy, frustrating and sexy Cloud could be.

But it makes me giggle.

ETA:  Ok, you people win.  (Twist my arm, twist my arm!  ^_^)  I'll leave it alone.  ;)
 

Date: 2009-07-09 04:04 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] qwi-xux.livejournal.com
Why on earth do you have to change it? I always love lines like that, where one word in particular is emphasized. ;)

Date: 2009-07-09 04:17 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
Oh... cause I thought maybe it's too silly? ^^; No?

Date: 2009-07-09 04:20 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] qwi-xux.livejournal.com
Well, I'm not sure where it fits in with your timeline of fics, but if it was before Tifa and Cloud were an item and really familiar to each other, it sounds like something Tifa would think to herself and then blush at for thinking as soon as Cloud looked at her. If they're already an item, she'd probably think it for the hell of it. ;) I like it. :D Particularly with the mix of "frustrating" in there.

Date: 2009-07-09 04:22 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
LOL. =)

It's for the next part of Fidelity. Her summation of what that week spent trying to seduce Cloud -- while Cloud thought she was with Zack -- felt like on her side. =)

Date: 2009-07-09 08:15 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] amethyst-key.livejournal.com
I think you should keep it the way it is, it's cute.

(And Cloud is sexy, you can never have that point brought up enough.)

Date: 2009-07-09 11:15 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] windrider1.livejournal.com
You forgot to mention Sexy... Cloud is SEXY. That can't be over-stated. In fact, there needs to be at least 2 more sexy comments.

But really, don't change it. ;)

Date: 2009-07-09 11:40 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] yuenmei.livejournal.com
SEXY. Sexy sex sex sex.

Seems appropriate to me.

Date: 2009-07-09 02:30 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] ashfae.livejournal.com
Why? I think it's hilarious. And so very very accurate. ;)

Date: 2009-07-10 04:23 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] niiicko.livejournal.com
Agreed! ^.^

Date: 2009-07-09 03:04 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kookyz.livejournal.com
SEXY.

Date: 2009-07-09 03:56 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/jane_drew_/
Heeeee! Keep it! Especially in context, with Tifa going out of her mind trying to drag the poor boy off to bed, and him Nobly Resisting Temptation, even when said temptation is reduced to.. um... wardrobe-related creativity by the end of a (very frustrating) week.

And if Cloud looks like he does in your icon, it's a wonder that "sexy" doesn't pop up even more often in Tifa's mental list. ;-)

JD

Date: 2009-07-10 09:11 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] jessicamariek.livejournal.com
I like that line. *gigglefit*

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