sekiharatae: Adult male protecting his mate (cloti protect)
Title:  Telling Actions
Characters:  Cloud/Tifa
Rating:  K
Notes:  For the [livejournal.com profile] ffvii_het_meme .  This time for a jealous Cloud set during the original game.

“How do you know Rude?”

Tifa shifted her eyes from Scarlet’s retreating back to Cloud’s curious and hard blue gaze. They were both lying flat on the ground, on their stomachs, behind some of the rubble inside the Gongaga reactor. “I don’t, not really,” she responded, brows furrowing in confusion. Shouldn’t Cloud be more concerned about what Shin-Ra was up to, than about how she might know the close-mouthed Turk? “He came into Seventh Heaven a few times, but we never spoke beyond giving and taking his order.”

“He has a crush on you.” The words were gruff and direct, and he smirked a bit when her eyes widened. “It’s why he never attacks you. Are you sure there isn’t something you need to tell me?” It was almost unheard of for a Turk to back down from a fight, especially when he or she had been ordered into it. Rude obviously had it bad for Tifa. The thought made his gut tighten and his jaw clench and his hand ache to punch the other man in the face.

“Yes, I’m sure,” Tifa’s tone was more than a little annoyed. What was Cloud trying to imply? “I’m a friendly person, and sometimes people like me.” Sarcasm was usually his weapon, but she could wield it as well. “It has little to do with anything I may or may not have done.” He should know that first hand: there was a time when he’d had a crush on her himself, and she’d scarcely said one word to him. Now he hardly seemed to remember her. Where her feelings had grown steady and constant, his seemed to have lessened over time, and turned fickle. He grunted, seemingly ignorant of her point, and her temper frayed a bit more. “Why do you care, anyway? Jealous?”

The next thing she knew he’d flipped her over and was straddling her thighs. Her hands were firmly clasped in his, and pressed into the ground on either side of her head. Most importantly, he was kissing her. In a way he hadn’t since before they met Aerith. His tongue swept between her lips, possessive and fierce, staking his claim. It only lasted a minute, but in that time he took all she had to offer, giving back the warmth of his body and the blistering heat of his arousal, leaving her gasping.

“No,” he answered, releasing her and rising smoothly to his feet, “I’m not.” Almost reflexively he offered his hand to pull her up as well, then abruptly turned his back and walked away, moving to examine the reactor core.

Only the bee-stung feel of her lips told her he'd lied.

Date: 2009-05-03 02:50 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] warangel88.livejournal.com
I love it.
I love jealous Cloud as much as I love jealous Tifa, and Cloud marking Tifa as his with a kiss.

Date: 2009-05-03 04:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] yuenmei.livejournal.com
alright, I'm pretty sure your icon is not referencing this song, but that's also the opening lines of a 2gether song... their hilarious "the hardest part of breaking up" and connecting that with Cloud and Tifa makes me crack up, haha!

Actually, it's a very nice icon. Cloud is so dreamy...

Date: 2009-05-03 11:32 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] windrider1.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm sure the lyrics come directly from that song. But I liked the implications taken out of context and in regards to Cloud/Geostigma and being away from his family... **ahem** Also, yes that makes me giggle snort. I had to go listen to the song and just about died laughing. Oh, crap, that seemed really random. I made the icon. LOL.

Date: 2009-05-03 06:49 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
Thanks! I took this opportunity to have Cloud be jealous in a less sweet, couple-y way. He's still having identity issues, and the main thing he knows is that he doesn't like that Rude is interested.

Date: 2009-05-03 04:10 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] windrider1.livejournal.com
Awesome!! So many people forget that Cloud has a bit of a temper and ego, and it's nice to see it pricked every once and awhile. Also, my favorite line: "Sarcasm was usually his weapon, but she could wield it as well." So very yes, for so many reasons.

Actually I could post an essay on how that line captures so much of what is missing in character development in fanfic. **adores you even more**

Date: 2009-05-03 06:51 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
I love that Cloud is sarcastic. It's one of the ways you can tell that he's smart, and stuff is going on in his head. =D

Date: 2009-05-03 04:44 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] yuenmei.livejournal.com
Oooh, it's interesting to read your in-game stuff, as you're dealing with a really different Cloud. I spent the day lazing around watching the CC cut-scenes in order and using the ffwiki as a guide to understand the plot, and I'm starting to think AC really did not to justice to Cloud's character. It's nice to see him have some attitude (but then there's the question of... is it really HIS attitude? oi, what a head ache Cloud is).

In any case, I'm glad he got a kiss in there <3 Even if he is a complete asshole.

Date: 2009-05-03 06:53 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
I'm not as comfortable with original-game Cloud. I mean... I still have moments when I'm not 100% sure of my AC Cloud, and I've been known to watch AC two or three times in a single day just because I can. (Or, at least parts of it.) I've only played the game once, and it was shortly after AC came out on DVD in the US. So it's been quite awhile.

I guess I'm struggling with who he is almost as much as he is himself. ^^;

Date: 2009-05-03 06:25 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/jane_drew_/
Tifa: Ok, so, if that's your reaction when you're _not_ jealous....

Umm... just to clarify, she is at this point wearing the Very Short Skirt that Tipsy!Cloud was mentioning in the previous story, yes? Which would mean that Cloud is, say, having to deal with imagining what other men (or, in this case, one specific guy) are thinking about the short skirt? Because, hee.

JD


(hmm... what is the best way to get to know the contents of FFVII if one doesn't own the game? That is, is the wiki the best, or is there a better resource?)

Date: 2009-05-03 06:33 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] yuenmei.livejournal.com
I think the FF wiki is amazing! Definitely try that first.

Date: 2009-05-03 06:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
LOL. Yes, she's wearing the short skirt that Tipsy!Cloud is remembering fondly. =D

I agree that the wiki is a great resource! I often go there and reread things as I write. YouTube can be good too, for watching game movies. (I watched a Gongaga game play video before writing this, so I could decide when/where to stage it.)

Date: 2009-05-03 07:04 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/jane_drew_/
Ah! Any recommended game movies?

JD

Date: 2009-05-03 09:38 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
I just posted a huuuuge list on my LJ. =) Just for you!

Date: 2009-05-03 11:27 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] windrider1.livejournal.com
http://members.fortunecity.com/sephkatana/ff7stuff/ff7sc.html

The entire 3 disc, original game script. No better dialogue source, but yes, wiki and youtube are also wonderful sources.

Date: 2009-05-03 11:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] robertmarilyn.livejournal.com
I just wrote this in reply to the Tipsy!Cloud story and it kind of ties into what you just wrote here:

"Whenever I think of Tifa, the martial artist, going thru the game in her two inch long skirt, kicking away at monsters and enemies, I crack up...esp kicking away at Reno and Rude!!!!!!

And I'm sure it must have been distracting to the other team members...really! So I enjoy well written stories about her outfit...not to mention her gravity defying top heavy uh, whataemcallits...he he."
mar

Date: 2009-05-03 12:56 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kaho0190.livejournal.com
So sweet and incredibily natural actions.
Love it! <3

Date: 2009-05-03 09:43 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
tyvm! =)

Date: 2009-05-03 04:47 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] qwi-xux.livejournal.com
Oooh, very nice! It's always interesting to see Cloud's interaction with Tifa when his brain was still so screwed up (I'm guessing from the way you wrote him here, and the reference to Aerith seeming to infer she's still alive, that this was before his head was screwed back on straight). I do love your mention of his sarcasm, because even though he still at this point had so much of Zack's persona and it was hard to know where Cloud started and Zack ended sometimes, Cloud still has sarcasm and a sense of humor.

And I *heart* the last line here.

Date: 2009-05-03 09:40 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
Yup, he's still messed in the head here. (Poor Cloud!)

I think, after watching the CC cut scenes, that the sarcasm is almost 100% Cloud. Zack is far more direct and cheerful with his humor. ^_^

TY!

Date: 2009-05-04 04:01 am (UTC)From: (Anonymous)
Just wanted to say...

I remember you from the days when your RK site was frequently updated and special LIAC skits appeared during the holidays. (I miss the LIAC skits, BTW. Those always made me laugh.) Glad to see that you are back again and writing. You're a talented writer... And we missed you.

So... Keep writing. Good fanfiction authors are few and far between. Best wishes.

:)

Date: 2009-05-04 08:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I'm glad you found me again.

I missed writing and being here on the 'net, too. =)

Date: 2009-05-04 01:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] quoth-the-ravyn.livejournal.com
Tifa: ... I think I was wrong about the 'hardly seemed to remember her' idea. Really, really wrong.
Cloud: *Smug*

=)

Date: 2009-05-04 08:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
LOL.

Date: 2009-05-05 07:30 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] niiicko.livejournal.com
Hubba hubba.
Take THAT Tifa! :D

Date: 2009-05-07 05:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
LOL.

She wants him to come back and do it again. She's not terribly pleased with him.

Date: 2009-05-07 11:44 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] parapluies.livejournal.com
Jealous Cloud is awesome!! I love Jealous!Cloud xD

Date: 2009-05-08 05:52 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
He's almost as good as Possessive!Cloud. When it's both Possessive!Cloud and Jealous!Cloud it's almost too much hotness in one place.

which makes me a happy fangirl indeed

Date: 2009-05-08 07:22 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] crystalstars-88.livejournal.com
I love when Cloud gets all territorial and needs to stake his claim on Tifa. It's such a turn-on in fanfiction, and women fantasize about it, but I'm sure in real-life it would be a pain;)

Date: 2009-05-09 12:19 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
Oh, I do too! I can't stop myself from writing him that way sometimes, and I really love to read it when someone else writes it, too.

But I think it would be a pain. =)

Date: 2009-05-08 11:56 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] knightlineninja.livejournal.com
About time Cloud...

;D

Date: 2009-05-25 06:52 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] amethyst-key.livejournal.com
Go jealous Cloud!

XD Oh Rude, you poor man, you don't stand a chance.

Date: 2009-05-26 12:12 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com
Well, not if Cloud gets moving, anyway!

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