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sekiharatae ([personal profile] sekiharatae) wrote2009-11-16 01:33 pm

Bold Tifa Revisited

So... way back in February, I asked what was happening in this comic, and [personal profile] elanor_pam kindly shared (turns out Cloud was as taken aback and confused as we are). However, there are four more pages... would anyone be kind enough to translate the rest?? Pretty pretty please?

And, to sweeten the deal, I'll let you prompt me. How does that sound?

Subsequent pages are linked from the above.

Thank you thank you in advance!

[identity profile] jlightning-wolf.livejournal.com 2009-11-17 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
Please keep giving me translation work. It's good practice and I'm enjoying the doujin you manage to find.

Title: Worrying

Page 1, Panel 1: Cloud, just back from work

Panel 3: Wha, what? Tifa?

Page 2, Panel 1: No injuries today?

Panel 2, Bubble: Yeah...
Text: Injuries?

Panel 2-3 transition: Well, before you never really took care of your own injuries.

Page 3, Panel 1: I'm home.

Panel 2: Gyah! Cloud! / What?

Panel 3, Bubble: Oh...
Text: Gushing blood

Panel 3, Ghost Bubble: Well, before...
Sword text: Masamune
Bubble: Rrr...

Panel 4, Text: Zach
Bubble: Gaaaaaaaaah!!
Sephiroth Text: What a stupid...
Ghost Bubble: ...Even before that

Page 4, Panel 1: What I'm asking is that if you get injured while you're working, please look after it properly.

Transition Bubble: You're carrying recovery materia, aren't you?

Panel 2: Surprised and touched (However, this is actually an onomatopoeia, so I'm not sure if I'd include it in an actual translation, since we usually just let the pictures speak for themselves.)

Panel 3, Bubble 1: ...Tifa.
Bubble 2: I had no idea you were so worried about me.
Bubble 3: It's not that...I wasn't...

Page 5, Panel 1: It's just that if the kids see your injuries, you'll scare them.

Panel 2, White Text: You're gonna die! Cloud's gonna die!
Text 2: Denzel
Bubble: Gyah!
Text 3: Marlene

Panel 3, Bubble 1: Well, that's not exactly the kind of thing I want them to see, so if I can't recover right there, I won't come home until my wounds heal.
Bubble 2: .......

Panel 4: I thought she would be happy...

End

I hope that was helpful. As for prompts, well I'm always happy to read your Ken X Kao stuff. Something canon would be wonderful.

[identity profile] sekiharatae.livejournal.com 2009-11-17 10:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, you are FABULOUS! Thanks so much!

And I do feel sorry for Cloud.

I'll see what I can come up with for a canon K&K fic! ^_^

P.S. Is it wrong of me to think it absolutely hysterical that she checked down the front of his pants for injuries?
Edited 2009-11-17 22:37 (UTC)

[identity profile] jlightning-wolf.livejournal.com 2009-11-17 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
That's not wrong at all. It would certainly make Cloud stand up and take notice...possibly really bad pun intended. I can't decide.

Really it's almost logical in a way. His pants are so baggy it'd be hard to tell...I should probably stop contemplating this. Anyways, glad you enjoyed it.