ext_378543 ([identity profile] jlightning-wolf.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sekiharatae 2009-11-17 10:12 am (UTC)

Please keep giving me translation work. It's good practice and I'm enjoying the doujin you manage to find.

Title: Worrying

Page 1, Panel 1: Cloud, just back from work

Panel 3: Wha, what? Tifa?

Page 2, Panel 1: No injuries today?

Panel 2, Bubble: Yeah...
Text: Injuries?

Panel 2-3 transition: Well, before you never really took care of your own injuries.

Page 3, Panel 1: I'm home.

Panel 2: Gyah! Cloud! / What?

Panel 3, Bubble: Oh...
Text: Gushing blood

Panel 3, Ghost Bubble: Well, before...
Sword text: Masamune
Bubble: Rrr...

Panel 4, Text: Zach
Bubble: Gaaaaaaaaah!!
Sephiroth Text: What a stupid...
Ghost Bubble: ...Even before that

Page 4, Panel 1: What I'm asking is that if you get injured while you're working, please look after it properly.

Transition Bubble: You're carrying recovery materia, aren't you?

Panel 2: Surprised and touched (However, this is actually an onomatopoeia, so I'm not sure if I'd include it in an actual translation, since we usually just let the pictures speak for themselves.)

Panel 3, Bubble 1: ...Tifa.
Bubble 2: I had no idea you were so worried about me.
Bubble 3: It's not that...I wasn't...

Page 5, Panel 1: It's just that if the kids see your injuries, you'll scare them.

Panel 2, White Text: You're gonna die! Cloud's gonna die!
Text 2: Denzel
Bubble: Gyah!
Text 3: Marlene

Panel 3, Bubble 1: Well, that's not exactly the kind of thing I want them to see, so if I can't recover right there, I won't come home until my wounds heal.
Bubble 2: .......

Panel 4: I thought she would be happy...

End

I hope that was helpful. As for prompts, well I'm always happy to read your Ken X Kao stuff. Something canon would be wonderful.

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