That snippet fic is really dark. The first thing my beta said is that it's disturbing. Which I have to say, makes me feel kinda weird. I didn't know I could write disturbing. On the positive side, it's proof I can make bad things happen to characters I like, which is good, because novels and such get boring if nothing bad ever happens. There has to be some conflict or antagonist or something. I've never really managed to do it though -- actually have something bad happen. I mean... worst I've done is give Kenshin a really bad cold!
If you really want to read it, I can maybe be persuaded to message it to you. But you have to promise not to shy away from my crack-brained self after reading the scariness!
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Date: 2009-03-06 01:09 am (UTC)From:If you really want to read it, I can maybe be persuaded to message it to you. But you have to promise not to shy away from my crack-brained self after reading the scariness!