You never cease to surprise me:) I was not expecting the ending-since I initially didn't know where the direction of Cloud's thoughts were heading. When he called Tifa spoiled I was thinking 'its because Cloud treats her better than the guy in the romance novel.' But then the pamphlet tipped me off, and I remembered Cloud's Mako and Jenova enhancements. It was a big "Ohhh" moment for me.
I liked how Tifa's prudish reticence over saying sexual words was countered by Cloud- the banter was great. I was initially wary at the "borderline crack" comment, because I assumed crack to mean that everybody was out of character, and the whole fic was a parody that mocked the fandom. But this was totally not-it was just a cute, humor filled piece.
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Date: 2009-05-08 07:19 am (UTC)From:I liked how Tifa's prudish reticence over saying sexual words was countered by Cloud- the banter was great. I was initially wary at the "borderline crack" comment, because I assumed crack to mean that everybody was out of character, and the whole fic was a parody that mocked the fandom. But this was totally not-it was just a cute, humor filled piece.