Awesome!! So many people forget that Cloud has a bit of a temper and ego, and it's nice to see it pricked every once and awhile. Also, my favorite line: "Sarcasm was usually his weapon, but she could wield it as well." So very yes, for so many reasons.
Actually I could post an essay on how that line captures so much of what is missing in character development in fanfic. **adores you even more**
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Date: 2009-05-03 04:10 am (UTC)From:Actually I could post an essay on how that line captures so much of what is missing in character development in fanfic. **adores you even more**