Date: 2009-05-03 01:43 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] yuenmei.livejournal.com
Haha my favorite:
“Marlene?”

“Panda.”

hahahahaha! Definitely laughed out loud at that one! Now that you've seen ACC, what is Cloud actually saying in that scene?

I also love Cloud's half-closed eyes, and I like how the words you chose to italicize really do make him sound tipsy and happy. I like his wording... that her legs went on "forever." I like that Cloud seems to have a personality when he's drunk, and it's a personality I find really endearing.

I also want to know what his first thought was, at the end! I have a few guesses...
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