I am commenting again because I reread it (loved it just as much if not more the second time through!) and I just want to say that Tifa thinking about Cloud kissing her is soooooooooo heart-melting! I think that's the best kiss I've read that doesn't actually take place in the story, haha. I want to hear more about this line of progression in their relationship!
You know, I feel a little bad for the other guy at the end! It's true, he did only compliment her... but as he'd been in the bar before, he should have known better than to do so while sitting in Cloud's seat!
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Date: 2009-04-28 06:27 am (UTC)From:You know, I feel a little bad for the other guy at the end! It's true, he did only compliment her... but as he'd been in the bar before, he should have known better than to do so while sitting in Cloud's seat!
Also, I love your icon, so cute!