YAY! This was awesome! I love the inquisition part. Just like my favorite cop shows! And Cloud? Just so cool, even though he was only in the laat part! And Nate...silly silly boy...you think that if they bring you in about Tifa that Cloud is not going to be in striding distance? I think not, m'dear. I still really don't like him, which is testament to your writing skills. Beacause I know that I am not supposed to like him, and with the bad guy I try to like him/her to see how well they are written, and I still don't like him...at all...can't wait for more!