http://amethyst-key.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] amethyst-key.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sekiharatae 2009-07-12 06:39 am (UTC)

Yay! Tifa's point of view!

LOL. I love the ping-pong part. I can so see Tifa's expression as: Wha...?

I also love that you kept the Which was how she ended up in Midgar, learning first-hand exactly how adorable, sexy, honest, sexy, sweet, sexy, frustrating and sexy Cloud could be. part the same. (Cloud is totally sexy.)

Moderately modest lingerie... *snorts* He had to go to the VCG because of that moderately modest lingerie.

Awesome! *Waits eagerly for smut*
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