ext_378735 ([identity profile] yuenmei.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sekiharatae 2009-07-03 11:42 am (UTC)

*chomps at bit* So exciting! I am totally anxious to find out what happens! Awesome job leading up to that cliffhanger!

Did Cissnei change her name? I hope she recognizes a creepy old guy when she see's/hears one!

Nice job characterizing Denzel, too. And, I think Marlene's jumping up to see Cloud worked out great ^_^.

Weeeeeeee thanks again for writing this! I love it so far! I can't wait for the next part!

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