Ohhh man, so well done. This was so cleanly written, not a word out of place, I'm really impressed. I think this is one of your most in-character Clouds yet. I thought his slight moment of panic was adorable. I would love to see insecure-Cloud explored more.

I love when Cloud says "When they do it" hahahaha! I can totally see him saying it all dead-pan. I love his conclusion that she is spoiled!

Also... Materia Blade of Unbridled Passion ... amazing title.

Thanks for sharing <3