"One word: mine. In the quiet that had descended over the room during their display, his soft voice was loud and carried to every corner."...I LOVED THAT! heehee! I loved how you put emphasis on the things that were Cloud's...like the seat, his spot, and Tifa! I also loved Tifa's smiling foolishly after being kissed at random moments...That is so true. And I loved how he reacted. I would think that, taking into account Tifa's little part, if something like that happened and he came home the next day and saw this I think that the way you wrote his response is compleatly rational...The 'What The Hell...Mine' response I mean...
=3 I just LOVED this...it made me smile!