ext_378537 ([identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/jane_drew_/) wrote in [personal profile] sekiharatae 2009-04-27 05:50 am (UTC)

The last line was excellent. As was the set-up-- considering Tifa's familiarity with running a bar, and all the annoyances that can go with it, it would indeed take something like this to disconcert her. Hee. And, as others have noted, the children's banter was spot-on.

Nice work!

JD

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